You came looking for a script to copy. There are eight below, situation by situation, ready to adapt. Take them. But keep one thing in mind while you read: what separates a message that holds a caller from one that makes them hang up rarely comes down to the words. It comes down to the order they arrive in.
The three pieces of information, and the order they arrive in
A caller listens to your greeting in a very particular state. They have a question in mind and they decide within seconds whether they are going to get an answer or waste their time. Three pieces of information drive that decision.
Who they have reached. What they should do now. When they will get an answer.
That order is not decorative. Identification comes first because the caller has sometimes dialed the wrong number and needs to be told straight away. The action comes next because it is the only thing they can do in the moment. The delay comes last because it works as a trade: I leave you a message, you call me back before tomorrow evening.
On length, our working benchmark fits on one line: two sentences for a daytime greeting, three for an after-hours message, one per hold segment. The rest is nearly always politeness added afterward.
One last point before the examples, and it is the one most often forgotten. A caller who has just dialed your number and a caller who has been waiting a while do not listen the same way. The first is available and ready to write something down. The second has already checked out mentally and is waiting for a signal. You do not write them the same text.
Eight greeting scripts, situation by situation
Every script below is complete: the brackets are yours to replace, everything else can be said as it stands.
Daytime reception
“Thank you for calling [company name]. One of our team will be with you in a moment, please hold.”
Why it works: nothing beyond identification and a framed wait. A daytime greeting has no information to deliver. Its only job is to make it clear the line is alive.
With a menu:
“Thank you for calling [company name]. For [service 1], press 1. For [service 2], press 2. To speak to an adviser, stay on the line.”
Why it works: the name of the service comes before the number to press. A caller listens first to recognize themselves in a label, and they only retain a key once they have heard the word that concerns them.
After hours
“Thank you for calling [company name]. You have reached us outside our opening hours. Leave your name, your number and what your call is about after the tone, and we will call you back when we reopen, [day] at [time].”
Why it works: the caller knows what to say before they hear the tone. Name the three things you want and your messages become usable first time.
Temporary closure
“Thank you for calling [company name]. Our team is away until [date] inclusive. For anything urgent, email [email address], that inbox is checked every day. We will answer every other message from [date].”
Why it works: a way out for the urgent case, and a firm date for everything else. A closure message that offers no alternative channel produces repeat calls on a line nobody is listening to.
On hold
Two short segments beat one continuous text:
“Thank you for holding, an adviser will be with you shortly.”
“You can check your case at any time at [website address].”
Why they work: they are written for a distracted ear. A hold message carries one idea and one only, it is spaced out generously over the music, and it does not repeat the company name on every loop. Nothing grates faster than a short loop.
From the booth
In the booth, the difficulty of a phone message sits at the end of the take. The system cuts straight into music or into the tone: a take stopped too abruptly sounds like a dropped line, a take that lingers makes the caller think they have been forgotten. So we calibrate a clean tail of silence at the end of every file. Something else no list of examples mentions: the greeting and the hold message are recorded in the same session, with the same voice, but never with the same energy.
High call volume
“Thank you for calling [company name]. We are taking an unusually high number of calls right now. Leave your number and what you need after the tone and we will call you back today. You can also email us at [email address].”
Why it works: no apology, two ways out. A caller who reaches a saturated line is waiting for an action, and an apology keeps them waiting for nothing.
Redirecting to another channel
“Thank you for calling [company name]. This line no longer handles [type of request]. For [type of request], email [email address] or sign in to [customer portal]. For anything else, stay on the line.”
Why it works: the redirect comes before the list of exceptions. The caller it concerns has their answer in one sentence and hangs up satisfied, the others stay.
What goes wrong nearly every time
Four faults come back on company phone systems again and again.
Long apologies. “We apologize for any inconvenience this may cause” takes up the most valuable attention in the message and gives no information at all. Put a sentence about action in its place.
The useful information placed at the end. The email address, the reopening time, the out-of-hours number: everything that has to be written down arrives too late in most messages. The caller has already stopped listening, or has not had time to find a pen.
Distorted hold music. Too loud, too compressed, looped too short, and rarely levelled properly when the voice sits over it. There is a legal blind spot too: hold music is a form of broadcast, so it needs a verifiable usage right, exactly like the voice.
The message recorded on a phone, from an open-plan office. This is the most audible fault of them all: background noise, ventilation, colleagues, and a voice that has already been through the phone bandwidth once before going through the system again. Then there is the tone. You hear the difference immediately between a text being read and a sentence addressed to somebody.
A voice every one of your customers hears
Plenty of companies have never run a commercial in their life. Every one of them has a greeting message, and every person who calls hears it. That message is not a piece of housekeeping, it is the busiest vocal touchpoint the company has.
That frequency changes everything. A hesitation, a fumbled word, a badly placed breath becomes a signature through sheer repetition. A professional voice, directed for this specific format, produces the opposite effect: it installs the same impression of seriousness on every call, without anyone consciously noticing. And if it is the same voice as on your other material, your phone system stops being an isolated sonic island and joins your sonic identity.
File format, the detail that blocks the most projects
This is the part nobody talks about, and it is where projects stop.
Traditional telephony carries the voice in a standardized narrow band, sampled at 8 kHz under ITU-T recommendation G.711. A beautiful studio master does not go in as it is. Beyond that shared constraint, every phone system and every carrier expects its own packaging: a file format, an encoding, a level, sometimes a maximum duration per message.
The reflex that saves weeks fits in one question, put to your telephony provider before anything is recorded: what format does your system accept messages in? The answer governs the whole preparation of the file. A studio delivering for telephony sets the sound to that band and supplies the packaging you were asked for. Our phone greeting and IVR recording service is ordered online and includes that conversion.
When calls come from several countries
The classic trap is stacking languages into a single greeting. The caller who speaks your first language listens to three translations before reaching what concerns them, and the caller who speaks another waits for theirs without knowing whether it is coming.
Two rules are enough. A short language selection at the head of the call, spoken in the language concerned: “Pour le français, tapez 2”. Then, behind every key, a complete path in that language, with the same information placed in the same order as in the original version. An international caller has to find the callback time in the same place as everybody else.
On the voice, the rule is simple: one language, one actor native to that language. An approximate accent on a greeting replayed at every call damages your credibility far more than it helps your scheduling. We build these paths in French, English, Spanish, Italian, German and Arabic from our voice over agency.
Take the scripts on this page, replace the brackets, read them out loud before you approve anything. You will hear at once which ones ring true and which ones trip. To have them delivered by a studio voice and supplied in your system’s format, the service is ordered online.
And if your setup sits outside the standard case, several sites, several languages, or a system that imposes its own constraints, describe the context and we will tell you what to record and how to deliver it. Let’s talk about your project.
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